So Much Stuff I Can't Recall

When Jude awoke, he didn't move. Didn't even open his eyes. He felt the crisp linen of a sheet pressed against his face, pressed against his whole body, and the sensation made him realize his clothes were missing. Buck-naked, as mom always said when he popped out of the bathtub. And something was tied to his toe. A piece of string? What kind of game was that? Not one he liked, he decided.

1. Which "darling" (character/scene/plot element) was most painful to kill?
   
   Oooh, that's a good one. We actually killed a few whole chapters in a couple sections, but I didn't really miss those.
   
   And, we killed one whole chapter from the Hunter's POV pretty late in the work that, at the time, was a tough darling to kill. I really liked it, and thought it may have had the creepiest scene in the entire book. In essence, it was about the Hunter spending some quality time in the basement, having a live rat snack and ruminating on the communal qualities of his interactions with Quarry.
   
   In retrospect, however, it was probably good to kill that chapter, because it may have put a few people over the top. And I think it almost suggested the Hunter was cannibalistic, which I'd never intended and wanted to back away from. It's hard enough to get people through a book about a child abductor; probably best not to add to the difficulty.
   
   Interestingly enough, however, Dave Long, my editor at Bethany House, didn't want to cut the chapter because of the content--he pointed out that nothing really "happens" in the chapter, and it only served to show the Hunter is a pretty creepy character. I think we'd already established that elsewhere pretty well.


2. I couldn't help but think of Stephen King's The Dead Zone once things really started moving for Jude. Anything you'd like to say about that? (The TDZ connection, not the way my mind works—or doesn't, as the case may be.)
   
   You know, I couldn't help but think of Stephen King's The Dead Zone while writing it. You got me. I think The Dead Zone is criminally overlooked in the King canon (as is its film counterpart)--if it can be said that anything by Stephen King has been overlooked in the least.
   
   TDZ was certainly an inspiration, and the two books have a similar "big picture"--both are about genuinely good, common men who have to come to grips with an overwhelming power--but I think they have different flavors. King veered more into high-stakes, world in peril kind of stuff, and thematically, TDZ seemed to be a lot about lost opportunities and lost chances. My story, I think, stays more personal and rural, and thematically is more about family relationships (specifically the relationship between father and son), and how those relationships can strengthen or warp.


3. You ever get Gregory Hines' mail by mistake?
   
   Only his utility bills, for some reason. None of his residual checks. I mean, think of the residuals he must have rolling in for Deal of the Century and Running Scared alone. [According to the Internet Movie Database, Greg Hines died in 2003 of liver cancer ... hmmm, where'd you say you did your research on this spontaneous resurrection biz, Tony?]


4. Talk about the "soundtrack," free-flow, stream of consciousness, avoid prepositions.
   
   Better Than Ezra yes a preposition but it's the band's name Pixies much Pixies Wilco Foo Fighters Hillsong Worship Derek Webb David Crowder Band--later drafts and edits--often just hit iPod's shuffle so mixed many many songs
   
   I went above and beyond, avoiding prepositions AND punctuation. Kinda like my first drafts.


5. What's next for Tony Hines? Another thriller? Broadway musical? Shadow puppets? What?
   
   My second book for Bethany House--another supernatural thriller. This one is set in Butte, Montana. It's tentatively titled Valley of Shadow (though we'll be picking a final title in the next few months), and it's about a woman who hears her dead father speaking to her from the shadows. He tells her the spirits of the dead occupy the shadows of our world, and convinces her to join a secret government network that communicates with the shadows. But all is not as it seems, naturally; soon, she finds out the true nature of the shadows--and the true nature of what they really want.
   
   This book, as you can probably tell, was inspired by The Bridges of Madison County.

Labels: Book Chat, Book Reviews

• Checking In


• In the top bunk


• At the top of the "treehouse [close-up]


• "Official" swim instructions (the ones the other day didn't count): 1, 2


• Doing the back float


• Yellow wristband (Phil can swim anywhere in the dock "horseshoe" as long as he has his lifevest on; no lifevest, no swimming anywhere)

• Big Honkin Moth (The little moth on the left is about two inches wide (wingtip to wingtip); the big honker has been living on the wall of one of the treehouses for several days now. Its body is about as big as my thumb. If it gets much bigger the littler kids like Phil will be in danger of being carried off to work the silk mines or something...)


• Dragonfly (Goodly-sized, but poses no immedieate threat.)

• Front


• Back

• Front


• Back

• The Troublemakers


• Phil's introduction to the exciting world of cuticle examination


• Who could ever think these kids were troublemakers?

1. I don't know everybody Angie does and


2. someone told me the other day that I remind them of Jack Black -- used to be I reminded people of Keifer Sutherland, then Al from Home Improvement, but I digress -- and


3. there aren't a lot of other people I'd be comfortable Photoshopping onto Jack's shoulders, let alone have a photo of them (though I came close to grabbimg Mike Snyder's off his blog)

I've been impressed with the "found poetry" in SPAM. Have you looked at the wonderfully crazy assortment of words that spam emails contain? I have no idea what this nonsensical gibberish is for...but I enjoy it for the slightest of seconds before deleting it forever.

Open My Hairpiece Highboy Pizza

Sagomac myjo kaseryza wypy gozupic nelazu.
                                    [– faux Baltoslavic proverb]

Your health,
      nose hitch, Mid-europe;
Your health,
      one-oclock, pearl diabase.
Your cash,
      outlet plate.

Fun,
      goat-toothed, Pro-soviet;
Fun,
      potassium hypoantimonate.
Cash,
      slave market.

Amazing stuff
            (your future),
      coffee borer
                  (oak gall).

• Bro


• Dude


• Man


• Mon
  (in as good a Jamaican accent as he can muster)

• Toots

• "Do Your Ears Hang Low" -- a line of Continental Soldiers
• Little Bunny Foo Foo
• The Itsy Bitsy Spider
• It's a Small World -- "The Mountains" of "the mountains are wide"
• The A B C's in Sign Language

The first time Jude Allman died, he was eight years old.