Wednesday, September 28, 2005
New Short Story
I recently sent a new short story in to an online competition sponsored by an acquisitions editor with Bethany House. (I mentioned it over on my other blog, so if it's news to you, check it out over there.)
Others who participated in the contest have begun posting their stories online, so I thought I might as well, as well.
THE LEGACY OF "LOCO" KOMOKO
Enjoy!
Others who participated in the contest have begun posting their stories online, so I thought I might as well, as well.
THE LEGACY OF "LOCO" KOMOKO
Enjoy!
Mikesell
6 Snarky Remarks:
Anonymous, at 10:44 PM
Absolutely love it! Great transitions and mood change.
Cindy
Cindy
der Fielden,
This story is very YOU--got the supernatural/fantasy element, humor, solid spiritual truth. Very nice story. I liked the shift in tense and POV from third to first. You made those work well for you.
Becky
This story is very YOU--got the supernatural/fantasy element, humor, solid spiritual truth. Very nice story. I liked the shift in tense and POV from third to first. You made those work well for you.
Becky
I still like this story a lot! And I love the angels. :)
Linda
Linda
I still love this story. The angels, Dan, all. Your voice shines. :)
Chris:
I found your story to be entirely imaginative with a high-energy narrative. Thanks for giving us this unique example of how to blend super-modern storytelling with universal Biblical truth.
I found your story to be entirely imaginative with a high-energy narrative. Thanks for giving us this unique example of how to blend super-modern storytelling with universal Biblical truth.
Janice LaQuiere